有点乱，但是对于很久没有写英文的来说很好了。我没有在你原文上该，只是用括号加上了我的建议。另外我用的是美语格式和语法。

希望能帮到你

Dear Prof.XX,

[中间要空行]

I am writing the mail [this email,或者是this letter] in purpose of asking for some advises on the research [in regard of...] .(你最好在前面说明一下关于什么的research)

Recently,i've [I 要大写] collected [只用collected表示你只是收集了，建议你把它改成read and studied] several papers written by your research group, [用句号] they help me to enhance the cognition of diseases,such as mammary tumourigenesis、endometrial cancer and ataxia et al in Pathophysiological level [这里的专用词语我不太清楚，你最好确认一下]. While reviewing Biochemistry,Pathology and Pathophysiology this summer,i'm [大写I] wondering if you,at your convenience,would like to recommend some further reading [复数] for me.

Meanwhile,As I've been in XX Hospital doing my intership [拼写错误internship] since this semester started[改成since the beginning of this semester](now i'm [大写I] in Vascualr [拼错了Vascular] Surgery),[用句号，不要把句子拖得太长] so,if you would like to introduce some about the diseases [instead of using some about the diseases, 改成some of your current studies] your research group have been focused on,i'll [大写I] do more study and prepartary [要用preparatory] work on them during my intership [同上，internship] for the coming research activities . [请问一下，你之后的research是在他的指导下做吗？如果不是，那最好修改这段话。]

All these request [复数，requests] above [没有谓语，加are] at your convenience.

[一定要加这句：Thank you very much for all your help and support.]

Looking forward to your reply with warm regards [这句话不通，直接用looking forward to your reply.就好了]

Sincerely yours. [不是句号，用逗号] XX [你的名字要放在下一行]

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