一、雅思写作避免使用语意弱的"be"动词

1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如∶

原文∶The trees are bare.The grass is brown.The landscape seems drab.

改写∶The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape.(转换为前置定语)Or∶The landscape， bare and brown， begged for spring green.(转换为并列结构作后置定语)

2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如∶1)原文∶ The team members are good players. 改写∶ The team members play well.

2)原文∶One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness. 改写∶One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

3、在以"here"或"there"开头的句子中，把"be"动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如∶

1)原文∶ There is no opportunity for promotion. 改写∶No opportunity for promotion exists.

2)原文∶Here are the books you ordered. 改写∶The books you ordered have arrived.

二、雅思写作多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了例如∶

1、原文∶My supervisor went past my desk.

改写∶My supervisor sauntered(=walked slowly)past my desk. 2、原文∶She is a careful shopper. 改写∶She compares prices and quality.

三、尽量运用主动语态例如∶

1、原文∶The organization has been supported by charity. 改写∶Charity has supported the organization.

2、原文∶The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

改写∶Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语

1、原文∶We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

改写∶We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

2、原文∶We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

改写∶We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

五、雅思写作杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语例如

1、原文∶They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form. 改写∶ They will not agree to any of his proposals.

2、原文∶I need her financial input before I can guestimate our expenditures next fall.

改写∶I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.

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